Headline clarity
Length, jargon, specificity and whether the line speaks to the reader instead of about you.
LandingLens reads your headline, subhead, call to action and body copy the way a first-time visitor does, then scores it out of 100 and tells you exactly which three lines to rewrite.
No vague grades. Every score maps to a rule you can act on in one edit.
Length, jargon, specificity and whether the line speaks to the reader instead of about you.
Verb-first phrasing, promised outcome, and a warning when the button just describes the click.
Sentence length distribution, so nothing above the fold reads like a contract.
Counts, ratings, guarantees and risk-reversal language a sceptical visitor looks for.
Whether there is enough copy to explain the offer and not so much that it buries the ask.
Findings ranked worst-first, each written as a sentence you can hand to a copywriter.